your third person should be a few paragraphs, and honestly it can be about anything as long as it gives a good impression of the character's personality and how they react to a situation. So... for example, my Starscream application was him disembodied and floating through the depths of space, flashbacking; whilst my Fakir one was about him freaking out becuase he couldn't find Duck and then wondering if his whole experience was even real; and my Sho one was him laughing about being free of Joshua's influence. Note that only ONE of those even took place in The City; the rest were actually more like just drabbles.
Hell, Eggo, do you want to see the four different samples I've written so you can have an idea of what they're looking for?
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Date: 2009-03-28 10:42 pm (UTC)Hell, Eggo, do you want to see the four different samples I've written so you can have an idea of what they're looking for?